Chapter One Beta Readers

Thanks to those who have turned in their comments. I am still missing several. The version of Chapter One that is up has been edited with their comments alone with comments from a professional author’s group that I belong to, so there are several important changes.

Again, please turn in your comments as I am about to move forward to Chapter Two. There won’t be a limitation on those I know by the way. 🙂

Thanks for your help!