Well, I have finished the rewrite of Chapter One. Thanks to everyone who has given feedback. I am now asking for some final beta readers for this chapter. If you are interested please go to:
There are two versions. After Lilith and the animal go to find Adam, they are identical. I particularly want feedback about which beginning you find stronger. The page gives links to both versions and to a questionnaire. Please read version one all the way through and then version two up to where they go to find Adam. Then fill out the survey.
Thank you for your help!