Well, I have finished the rewrite of Chapter One. Thanks to everyone who has given feedback. I am now asking for some final beta readers for this chapter. If you are interested please go to:

http://www.jeanniemusick.com/wanchairna/

There are two versions. After Lilith and the animal go to find Adam, they are identical. I particularly want feedback about which beginning you find stronger. The page gives links to both versions and to a questionnaire. Please read version one all the way through and then version two up to where they go to find Adam. Then fill out the survey.

Thank you for your help!

Jeannie

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